Below are examples of my editing style as well as published works I have copyedited.
Copyediting sample -- This excerpt from a novel is an example of a medium copyedit. It includes some rewording of sentences for clarity.
Developmental Editing Sample -- This novel excerpt shows my use of comments to point out minor issues that should be addressed in a particular scene.
Dirty Laundry: From the Streets to an Executive -- One Man's Forty-Year Journey by Ivan Von Baublitz (Autobiography)
The Secret Adventures of Agents Salamander & Crow by E. W. Farnsworth
The Spook and the Spirit and the Stone by Jilly Paddock
The Adventures of Lazarus Gray, Volume Six by Barry Reese
Haunted Blades: Tales of the Black Musketeers by John Simcoe, Ralph Angelo Jr., and C. William Russette
Flare: The Shining Goddess of Light by Lou Mougin, M. Hadley, and Brendan Jones
Pulp at War by J. Walt Layne, Rob Mancebo, and Teel James Glenn
Truth is No Stranger by Tim Holter Bruckner
A Glimmer on the Blade by Rachel E. Baddorf
1950s Western Roundup by Gordon Dymowski, B.C. Bell, and Tyler Aufhammer
The McKenzie Files, Book 1 by Barry Nelson
Revelation, Part 1 by Dave Salvi
Revelation: Rise of the Fallen by Dave Salvi
Other edited works not yet published:
Russian Roulette by J. Walt Layne
Desert Sun, Red Blood, Volume II by E. W. Farnsworth
Into the Void by Chuck Miller
New Adventures of Richard Knight, Volume 3 by I. A. Watson
McKenzie Files, Books 2-3 by Barry Nelson
The Second Book of Babylon by Barry Reese
Swords Against the Snakes by Glynn Owen Barrass
Mico by Edward Gregory
My Published Works
My short stories appeared in various issues of two different literary magazines.
Entering the Ice Age
"Are You Listening?" in CC&D Magazine v215, 2010
Into the White
"The Price of Life" in CC&D Magazine v216, 2010
Enriched Prose Anthology.
"Are You Listening?" and "The Price of Life" both appeared in CC&D's bi-annual anthology, 2010.
Metal Scratches Issue 13.
"Blue Corner" in Metal Scratches, Issue 13, 2011
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